You Never Talk Dirty to Me

Posted by Amos Robinson on December 28th, 2008 filed in

You Never Talk Dirty To Me

A tone poem. Ideally I’d like to record a short (silent) film acting it out, but I probably never will. It would go something like this:
Two men are sitting at a bus shelter. They’re old, grey hair, and they both have boomboxes. Man 1 points at something out of shot, CU to shot of sign saying “fluoride”, for about a second. CU to Man 1’s face, then to Man 2’s face. CU to a young girl, mid-twenties, red hair sitting between them. Wide shot of bus stop with just the two men. CU to shot of sign saying “fluoride” and repeat that sequence a few times, with them swapping spots (Man1,Girl,Man2; Man2,Girl,Man1; Girl,Man1,Man2; etc). Man2 puts his hat on and walks behind the bus shelter. End.


One Response to “You Never Talk Dirty to Me”

  1. Carly Lyddiard Says:

    Oooh, I like it :-D

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